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Ok I want you to tell me how good this story is so far. Ok? So here it is. . .
  

                                                       
                                                         Sam's Life

                                                    End of The School Year
   "Z...Z...Z... ," I slept. "Mrs. Peters!" Mrs.Phinkel exclaimed. "Yeah! yeah! what!"I said while I woke up. "Can you wake up?" She asked. "Okay, okay," "Why am I here? And Where am I?" I asked. "Well, your here for learning and your at school Samantha Peters," Mrs.Phinkel told me. It gets worse. All of a sudden I hear. . . "Ha! ha! ha!" Over and over and over again. A slight tear came down my eye. I was so embarrassed! Even my friends were laughing. "Mrs. Phinkel, may I go to the bathroom?"I asked. "Is the pass there?" She said as she was writing on the white board. "Yes," I told her. "Then yes," She said back. "Okay, thank you," I said. So I ran to get the pass on the pass hook. I took the pass and put it on my desk. I opened the door and fast walked out of the room. When I was out I speed walked all the way to the bathroom. Before I walked in I saw a chair outside of the bathroom so i picked it up and brought it into one of the stalls. Then I started crying and whimpering. About ten minutes later I came out and got a tissue and then went back in and started crying. About fifteen minutes later Mrs.Phinkel came in and heard me. "Samantha? Are you okay?" She asked. "No," I replied. "What's wrong?" She questioned. "Well, you kind of embarrassed me in front of the entire class!" I quietly exclaimed. "Will you forgive me Samantha?"She said in a small voice. "I guess," I said, as I was wondering if I had done the right thing. So I walked out of the stall. I cleaned myself up and we walked back to class. So as you may know I am Samantha Rena Peters, but I like Sam better then Samantha. I'm in the 5th grade. My teacher is Mrs.Phinkel. I am totally a girl, but not a girly girl, all the way I guess. My parents are divorced, I only have two friends. So this week we have to do this paper about ourselves. SO here is my example paper for you to know more about me.

           Hi, my name is Sam Peters. I am 11 years old. I have 1 dad, 1 mom, 0 brothers, and 0 sisters. I also have 2 pets, they're a dog and a fish, their names are Sadie which is the dog and Chloe the fish. I have 2 friends, their names are Molly Anders and Jessica Puff. My favorite color is blue. My 1 favorite activity is sports. I have brown hair and blue eyes. My favorite hot spot is Caseville which is my up north, during the summer is the best! If i could i would take a taxi, walking, or a limo, at least i might. Things i would bring were a camera, water bottle, sunglasses, and summer clothes. My favorite song is either "Marry You" or "Let It Rain". Also my favorite singer is Bruno Mars.

      So the next day I turned it in and she copied it and everyone elses paper and gave it to everyone in the class. "Oh no," I shrugged as I sunk down into my chair. "Just great!" I added. So I read John's and Cara's paper and they also were kind of embarrassed of their favorite singer or favorite song(s). I was embarrassed about those things too, well because some might not be in anymore. John's favorite song was "Soul Sister" and his favorite singer is Christina Agulara. Cara's favorite song(s) were "Love Like Whoa" and "Edge of Glory". Her favorite singer is Lady Gaga. Well of course mine are "Marry You" and "Let It Rain". My favorite singer was Bruno Mars. Who really knows what songs or singers that are in right now, you never know. Then all of the sudden I heard a laugh. . . "Oh no!" I thought to myself. "Who? What? When? Where? How? Why?" I asked Jessica. Okay, let me start. Who? wait, who is laughing or who is getting made fun of?" She asked me. " Am... both,"I replied. "Okay. So its Leo, Zane, Carmen, Jenifer, and Joey making fun of... Molly!" "What! Slap me with a Kansas City pickle!" "Wait no that's not Molly that's Mollin Corfor," she said relieved. "Um... okay I know what is next. What? It's about someones paper. So next is when. When? That's easy, now. Okay so next will be where. Where? They're by the drinking fountain." She pointed out. "How? Okay so they might think it is funny," She rolled her eyes. "And last but not least... why! Why? Their there... wait let me start over. Their laughing because there might be an embarrassing fact about their favorite song or singer," Jessica told me. "Wait! That's not his or her paper. That's our class sitting chart, and Molly and Mollin's name are at the top," I spoke. "Phew!" We agreed.

Hello:)

July 5, 2011,
 

                 Today I'm starting my first blog ever! I will have stories and maybe pictures:) I hope i have a fun time doing this. I might have all different things on here for my blog.